Lean Days and Lonely Nights
She lays, waits for his touch to reach through her
foggy memory – swallowed desire.
She misses the catch of breath, the small gasp
and sharp intake of oxygen before
a sigh of release escapes between them.
Exhaling into their kiss, lips parted,
she tastes the scent of him as he leaves her.
He misses the sound of her whispering;
graveled growl of passion when she wants him;
and her laughter, that deep-throated rumble
so rare in these lean days and lonely nights.
Eyes closed, he twists and turns. Entering her
in his imagination, he feels her
warmth, the acceptance he’s been waiting for.
Siobhan
08/18/2010
August 25, 2010 at 3:27 am
so much craving…………
her imagination has depth. nice one
August 25, 2010 at 7:57 am
great job…
creative and fun images!
August 25, 2010 at 9:27 am
I love the depth of feeling and need expressed here with this piece.
August 25, 2010 at 7:22 pm
Beautiful imagery of love. Well done x
August 26, 2010 at 4:18 am
yearning… put across awesomely
tactly worded
here from Jingle’s Rally.. u can read my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/footprint/
August 26, 2010 at 7:47 am
I’m hungry
Well done!
August 26, 2010 at 5:10 pm
Wow. Excellent writing.
August 26, 2010 at 7:56 pm
a very powerful longing… I love your poems, they’re just my kinda poetry, deep, personal and raw.. Thank you for sharing them, Kim, nice to discover your works via Poet’s Rally
Pray for no more lean days and lonely nights.
August 27, 2010 at 6:55 am
Thank you – not sure where you got the name “Kim”; my name is Siobhan.
August 31, 2010 at 8:04 am
Sorry my bad
August 27, 2010 at 9:01 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-birthday-2-lisa-plus-happy-belated/
a butterfly award for you.
August 27, 2010 at 2:42 pm
A beautiful ode to desire & loss– nicely done!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
August 27, 2010 at 6:55 pm
Very nice
August 27, 2010 at 11:59 pm
You are so right. WE all do have those lonely nights recalling those in the past who brought such a happiness into our lives. It’s funny how we remember traits associated with senses.
she tastes the scent of him as he leaves her.
Eyes closed, he twists and turns. Entering her
in his imagination, he feels her
warmth,
Were the words that took my breath away allowing me to sink in their memories trying to find my own. Beautiful work.
August 28, 2010 at 8:10 am
great………
I will place your link in,
your job is to scan the participant list, visit and comment for a minimum 18 poets…
have fun!
August 28, 2010 at 8:12 am
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August 28, 2010 at 8:37 am
powerful imagery.. well done!
my rally entry is The Butterfly Lover
August 28, 2010 at 9:10 am
excellently written, thank you for sharing x
my poem for week 27
http://kashaw.wordpress.com/2010/08/21/the-northern-lights/
August 28, 2010 at 9:50 am
Brilliant!!!!
August 28, 2010 at 3:28 pm
Beautiful imagery, Siobhan. Thank you.
August 29, 2010 at 6:54 am
great poem.
I sense the emotion in your words
August 29, 2010 at 7:15 pm
Good poem.
It gives great imagery with your words.
August 29, 2010 at 7:34 pm
Wonderful. Very sensual.
August 29, 2010 at 10:50 pm
The imagery is wonderful and every lines speaks well.
August 30, 2010 at 10:21 am
A good one.
see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com
cheers
August 31, 2010 at 7:48 am
u have done beautiful job for the week.
September 6, 2010 at 7:48 am
we all have moments like these.. i can relate..
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